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A Sapphire Shines in Sinnoh (Save #4 - Facade)
>CONTINUE
NEW GAME
OPTION
PLAYER Rustfur
BADGES         0
POKeDEX       9
TIME        7:00
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  On the other side of the clearing, Sapphire's shouts brought Leafpool nad Fireheart to their paws with alarm. "Rustfur? Rustfur, are you all right?" the Leafeon called back, standing with her paws against the cage bars.
  A passing Sneasel caught ear of the Grass-type's concerned tone and decided to have a little bit of fun with her. "Hey you, paws off the cage! Else I might have to tickle the little one's throat with this claw here." he taunted, wiggling a keen claw under the Leafeon's amber eyes.
  Like a bolt of lightning wearing tan fur, Leafpool's paw flashed between the space between the bars, outstretched claws finding purchase in the Dark-type's paw. A swift yank from the confined Pokemon pulled the Sneasel's head just close enough that she could close her teeth on its ear.
  Panicked st
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A Sapphire Shines in Sinnoh (Save #3 - Payback)
>CONTINUE
NEW GAME
OPTION
PLAYER Rustfur
BADGES         0
POKeDEX       9
TIME        5:00
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  On the other side of the clearing sleep was at a premium, especially for Leafpool. Every time she closed her eyes the sight of her kit's terrified face as he was dragged away haunted her.
  The commotion caused by Sapphire's introduction instantly seized her attention. "Rustfur..." It was too dark for her to properly see what was going on in her son's cage. She could only tell that he was talking with someone.
  "Leafpool?" Accompanying the quiet voice, a gentle nudge brushed against the Leafeon's shoulder.
  "What is it, Needlefur?" she muttered, keeping her eyes trained on the distant cage.
  "I know you're concerned about Rustfur; we all are. But you really must try and get some sleep."
  "That's easy for you to say. All of your sons are still here." Leafpool's broad tail swept acro
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Literature
A Sapphire Shines in Sinnoh (Save #2 - Moonlight)
>CONTINUE
NEW GAME
OPTION
PLAYER Rustfur
BADGES         0
POKeDEX       9
TIME        3:00
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  If I followed them correctly, Fireheart's directions should place the Pecha berries right... Needlefur paused her trek through the low riding early morning fog to look around. Ah! There they are.
  A quick shake of one of the tree's lower branches dropped six of the pale orange berries at the Jolteon's paws. She took these by their leaves and sprinted away, en route to the Daycare. Since their retreat the day before, no one had seen any further traces of the two hooded figures or their Pokemon. Still, the less time Needlefur spent out in the forest, the better.
  One leap took her to the top of the fence and one more to the damp grass below. She was quickly hailed by a male voice.
  "You're up earlier than usual."
  "Better safe than sorry, Torrentpaw." she replied after remov
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Literature
A Sapphire Shines in Sinnoh (Save #1 - Pursuit)
CONTINUE
>NEW GAME
OPTION
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 Not even the very best Pokemon Trainer can raise all of their Pokemon all of the time. For those with more Pokemon than they can carry, the Daycare Centers are invaluable. Kanto, Johto, Hoenn and beyond; it doesn't matter where you are. Every region has their own facilities available for the discerning Trainer.
  Smack in the middle of the Sinnoh region, one such Trainer has chosen the Solaceon center as his companions' home away from home. Pops of white light flashed brightly against the night air, numbering eight in total. As the last burst faded away, the Trainer knelt in the cool grass, nodding for the Pokemon to gather around him. Each one obliged without protest. Their Trainer always spoke to them at their level, as partners and equals.
  His eyes slowly traveled across the group as he spoke. "Listen up, everyone. I've gotten wind of some...extremists running around the Kalos region like they own the place. Can't
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 17
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 17
         Sisterhood Like Moon Pies

  "W-we're not gonna be able t'go home agin, are we?"
  "Ah told ya not to look out the window..."
  A short period of silence followed before, "Big Mac?"
  "Don't look out the window."
  "Big Mac! Answer me!"
  A massive red nose descended upon the yellow filly and hoisted her, protesting, into the air. The pony attached to the nose placed his younger sister on the far side of the seat.
  "Move me all ya want, but that ain't gonna stop me from askin'!"
  Big Macintosh sighed and looked out the window of the train. The black plume of oily smoke painted an unsightly smear upon the blue sky. As much as he wanted to deny it, he knew that it was going to come to something like this. He just wished that it hadn't.
  "Well? Can we go home or not?"
  "No, Apple Bloom. We can't. Not fer a while anyway."
  The somber answer put a damper on the young pony's demanding. "So where're we gonna stay then?"
  "Until thi
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Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 16
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 16
         The Best-laid Plans...

  There's a funny thing about the Everfree Forest. Ponies come, ponies go, and ponies just pass through, and yet, life in the forest continues on, with barely an eye batted. Such was it for the three pegasi flying in tight formation just above the sea of trees. Words were not spoken between them, but the tension was palpable. Finally, the group dove into the foliage near an unusually large tree. A space between two thick roots had been hollowed out, creating a tunnel down into the earth.
  One by one, the three pegasi filed down into the darkness. It wasn't until the lone stallion of the group reached the bottom that his voice was finally heard. "Dammit, Stratus..."
  "What now? The pink-maned pegasus coming down the stairs behind the stallion answered her own question as soon as it had left her mouth. The large circular room before her had been left in total disarray. Tables and chairs were upended and broken. Bo
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 15
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 15
         Home Fires

  When traveling alone, time tends to pass on quite the slow side. The solitude also affords a pony much time for reflection. The airborne chariot ride was particularly bumpy, given the speed of its travel, but its lone occupant hardly felt it, lost in thought as he was.
  "Forgive my interruption, sir," one of the pulling ponies spoke over the rushing wind. "but you've hardly spoken a word since our departure last night. Is everything all right?"
  "My apologies, soldier." the well-armored unicorn stallion called back. "I know I haven't been much for conversation, but I'm a bit troubled."
  "Might I ask what about, sir?"
  "The faster you get us to Canterlot, the faster you'll find out. Double time!"
  "You heard him, boys! Let's pick up the pace!"
  The chariot lurched as the four pegasi set their shoulders to their harnesses.
  How did this happen? The stallion was beyond confused. Everything had gone to pieces upon
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 14
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 14
          Lullaby For a Princess

   Celestia and Zecora had remained in the hallway for several minutes after Luna's departure, waiting for her return. After roughly five minutes, they resumed their trek. Their destination: the massive Canterlot Archives.
   No sooner had the pair stepped inside than they were approached by a blue unicorn stallion. "Salutations, your Majesty. What brings you to the archives today?"
   "Good morning, Crescent. We've come looking for some information."
   Magic removed the stallion's monocle and held it before his muzzle. He breathed on it several times and cleaned it upon his chest, replacing it afterwards. "Naturally. What are you looking for?"
   "Two things, actually. One: anything regarding sinkstones. Two: I'm looking for a spell that one can use to reverse disguising magic."
 
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 13
Storms On the Horizon: Chapter 13
          Breaking the Moon

   For a farm pony, there is no better sensation than the feeling of freshly plowed earth beneath your hooves to let you know you're putting a in a hard day's work. Except maybe the hunger one gets when you skip breakfast to get started on that hard work. Big Macintosh was just finished plowing the sixth row for the soon to be carrot patch as his stomach gave one loud growl of protest. "Ah reckon it's gettin' t'be that time."
   The big earth pony shrugged off the yoke for his plow and set his course for the farmhouse. Cooking was not quite his forte, so Big Macintosh gravitated towards the refrigerator, hoping to fins dome leftovers that would be suitable for breakfast. His eyes fell upon the rest of the pancakes that Fluttershy had prepared one day prior. Sure, they were cold, but the farm pony wasn't overly picky. Out came the plate of
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 12
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 12
          Second Guesses

   There is nothing more frustrating than lying awake in your bed, exhausted, yet unable to fall asleep, and, as a dressmaker, Rarity knew about frustration. Sighing, the unicorn mare opened her eyes to her sleep mask and sat up. Her horn glowed a light blue as magic removed the mask. I'm relieved to see Fluttershy and Applejack safe, but even they didn't have any information about Twilight... A yawn forced its way from the pony's mouth and she blinked sleepily. "Heavens..."
   Following a slight mane adjustment, Rarity slipped out of bed. Having spent years in her profession, she had seen her share of sleepless nights. There was always one thing that had helped with getting some rest; her secret weapon, so to speak.
   Breeze, the guard outside Rarity's door, turned to face her as it was opened behind him. "At your serv
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 11
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 11
          Inside Out

   For any pony other than a pegasus or alicorn, flight is not something oft experienced. Suspended aloft by a gentle yellow magic, Twilight got a very good view of Canterlot. Buildings rushed by beneath her while the marbled walls of the palace grew ever closer. Celestia landed before the palace gates and issued a call up to the gatekeeper currently on post. "Lower the gates!"
   A white face appeared at the window for an instant before vanishing again. Chains and wheels began creaking, slowly dropping the massive drawbridge. The owner of this white face came galloping down out of the gatehouse to greet the royal sisters. "Your Majesties!"
   Celestia acknowledged his salute with a quick nod. "At ease, soldier. The last Element is home. You may return to your post."
   "Of course, Your Majesty." The guard sent the p
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 10
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 10
          Flight Of the Unicorn

   There were no nightmares this time around; Twilight simply awoke to the slowly receding throbs of a painful headache. Thankfully her gag had been removed so she could finally breathe normally again. Apart from the absence of its horrid taste in her mouth, its disappearance was of little solace to the unicorn; her blindfold was still in place. Even so, she could still tell that her legs were bound once more, this time with rope instead of iron.
   There must have been a door somewhere in the darkness caused by her blindfold; Twilight could hear faint voices, as if blocked by darkness.
   "So, what do we do now? Sit here in this hole in the ground?"
   "For the time being, yes. We're dealing with the Elements of Harmony here. If we step too far out of line, that's it, we're done. Do you remember how far w
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 9
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 9
          The Dark Side of the Moon

   A farm of any kind requires a good deal of work to keep running smoothly. That work usually requires a routine that starts with rising with the sun.
   This morning, however, the sun was late in rising. Regardless, Big Macintosh was awake at the same time as usual. The first thing he noticed upon waking was the lack of early morning sun seeping in through the window. His bed creaked a little as he rolled over to check his clock. Nope, six o' clock. Huh...Ah wonder if the Princesses are feelin' under the weather...
   Whatever the issue was, the big earth pony didn't dwell on it long. He rolled out of bed and cantered downstairs to get started with his routine. If memory served, Applejack had organized for the weather team to provide a rainstorm for the fields today, which meant that Big Macintosh had to get
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Literature
Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 8
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 8
          Letters From Home

   "If Her Majesty herself doesn't even know all of the secrets of this castle, then what are we expected to find?"
   A voice echoed down the corridor-like room, coming from behind one of a dozen columns. "Our orders were to investigate the grounds for anything out of the ordinary. Have you found anything that would qualify as such, Cross Wind?"
   "Negative. The masonry on this pedestal is loose and cracked in places, but that's nothing more than age. What about you, sir?"
   "Not a thing." Zephyr replied, appearing from behind an exquisitely designed column. "Whoever designed this castle wanted those secrets to stay that way."
   "Wait, wasn't it the Princess herself that ordered the building of this castle?"
   "Yes, Cross Wind, that is true. However, you sould also know that H
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Storms On the Horizon: Ch. 7
Storms On the Horizon, Chapter 7
          A Promise is a Promise

   "Come now, Luna, those faces weren't very lady-like."
   A chill colder than a Windigo's breath shot down the alicorn's spine. That voice... No...
   "Really now? You won't even look me in the eyes? But, my dear, it's been so long..."
   Was it curiosity? Was it some kind of magic? Luna didn't know. She only knew that it was against her better judgment to look at the talking mirror. Still, she couldn't help herself. The pony looked up, straight into a pair of glowing eyes. The reflection of her face slowly twisted itself into the black visage of her former alter-ego. "Nightmare Moon..."
   The black alicorn smiled. "That's all you have to say to me? For shame..."
   If any expression was to be found upon Luna's face, it was one of calm composure. "You and I are no lo
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To all of you that celebrate it, let me wish you a Merry Christmas. To those of you that do not, let me instead wish you a happy holiday season of your choice.

Before I get into my little Christmas miracle, let me shed a little backstory on things. When I stepped back from Pokemon fiction, I had already had about 7 chapters of Shadows of Deceit written. After about a month, by some fantastic stretch of the mind, I managed to misplace the notebook I had transcribed these chapters in. Don't ask me how, I don't honestly remember, nor did I remember where I had lost it, be it at my actual home or at my apartment I stayed at during the school season. Despite searching, I could not find it at either location. Given my recent interest and rewriting of ASSiS, I had made it a point to scour my room during my visit home for Christmas. Obviously, this morning and much of the day was spent opening gifts and having a grand time with family.

When said family retired about an hour ago, I came downstairs to change into my own PJs. I knew where I had kept the binders holding the notebooks within which ASSiS and ST were written, along with the binder that I knew I had started writing SoD in. For the longest time, I was convinced that the misplaced notebook was within. Surprise, surprise, it wasn't. I stood up resignedly and muttered "I bet it's somewhere up at school." Literally no sooner had those words come out of my mouth than my eye drifted to the cabinet where I keep all of my old issues of Nintendo Power, catching something that looked like the wire of a spiral-bound notebook near the top of the stack. Figuring "Why not?" I slid the two magazines off the top. The backing of the notebook had been torn off, so I could read the words on the page immediately. Not something I had written for ASSiS or ST, yet it mentioned the same characters. Flipped the notebook over to look at the first page, and bam, there it was; "Shadows of Deceit" written across the top. After two years, I had finally found the damn thing!

Of course, I sat down and started reading it. Honestly, I had forgotten I had turned things up to such a level in the first four chapters. I actually put it down for a moment and went "Oh sh*t..." out of pure shock.

I've kept you all waiting long enough for this story, so here's how we're going to do things. I'll go back through the first 7 chapters of SoD and bring them up to speed with what writing tricks I've learned. Once that's done, I'll release them in between the chapters of the current New Game Project, and then alternate between chapter releases. So far, the rewriting of ASSiS has been incredibly easy, with Chapter 2 done and awaiting its pre-readers and Chapter 3 about half done.

It's hard to explain how ecstatic I am about this discovery with mere words, so allow me to make a comparison. As happy as I was to see a Wii U under the tree, it's nothing compared to how excited I am to have found Shadows of Deceit again.
  • Listening to: When Can I See You Again - Owl City
  • Reading: Shadows of Deceit
  • Watching: Game Grumps
  • Playing: Starbound.
  • Eating: Home cooking.
  • Drinking: ALL OF THE SWEET TEA.

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Eeveexpert
The guy with all the Eevees.
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Anyone who knows me already knows the following, but, for those who don't, take some notes; there will be a quiz at the end of this.

Outside of writing, I have no artistic ability whatsoever. I first came to deviantART back in July of 2007, with an idea for a Pokemon fanfiction entitled A Sapphire Shines in Sinnoh. Since then, ASSiS has generated two sequels and garnered me a handful of watchers. I am predominately a self-taught writer and I'm always wanting to become better at fanfictioning, whether it be Pokemon or My Little Pony.

Quiz Time! Hope you took notes.

1. The best pony is:
A. Fluttershy.
B. Fluttershy.
C. Fluttershy.
D. All of the above.
E. Princess Luna.
F. A, B, C, D, and E.
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Lakword Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy Birthday ^^ :iconcakeplz:
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ZaneusNova Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday! :icondragonhug:
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dawn-the-twilight Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
happy birthday
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ZaneusNova Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday! :icondragonglomp:
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Lakword Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy Birthday ^^ :iconcakeplz: I wish you many new watchers and a creative years to come :D
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ZaneusNova Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I have seen that you have not posted something for a long time, and it has been sometime since you rediscovered the notebook containing what you have written of "Shadows of Deceit". I hope this does not mean that you won't be doing said story. I would love to read it. I have loved the story so far.
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Eeveexpert Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear you enjoyed reading what I've done so far!

As to answer your question, or perhaps explain it, I am currently in the process of rewriting both ASSiS and (eventually) ST from scratch. I do plan to do SoD afterwards, but only after both rewrites have been finished, as new characters will be brought in in ST, and I'll need time to develop interactions, so as much as I want to work on SoD, it's a ways in the future yet.
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ZaneusNova Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. Thank you for explaining things for me. ^_^
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KurseofKings Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Are you still alive?
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Lakword Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconcakeplz: Happy Birthday!!!!
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Spyling Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Btw, i send Carni a copy too. He was reading it and he says that he likes it, but it has some major grammar errors. But thats because i write englisch in "German" sentences. Its pretty hard for me to correct my own errors cuz i don't see them. Could you, by any chance, help me to correct those errors? :3
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Spyling Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Say Eevee. I was making another commission to carni recently and it's going to be about Myxine and Ambrosia. In short, its NSFW XD
I was even writing a little fic about it and i wanted to ask you if you might want to take a look? I really need some opinions and critique for it. Also my english is not so decent in terms of grammar. Its 16 pages long and  9000 words big. I already sendt carni a copy but i also wanted to hear your opinion too as a skilled author such as you.

I was writing fics in the past, but that was quite a while ago. Let me know when you're interested.
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Eeveexpert Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Go for it! I've got a pre-reader to catch my own grammar mistakes; Celestia knows I still need practice here and there, but I'd be happy to give it a look-see.
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Spyling Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nevermind, i uploaded it with Google Drive


I hope it works. Never used it.
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Spyling Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, do you have an email account where i can send it to ya? (Send me via private note :P)
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